eyes : Deep, bright, shining,
sharp, big, soft, beautiful, expressive, glistening, innocent, shimmering, dancing, dull, surprised, sad, angry, furious,
flashing, etc. describe the color, lashes, emotion within, cast
mouth : Sweet, kissable, inviting, delicious, full,
pouty, thin, succulent, moist, luscious, etc. describe the color, shape, moisture, teeth, emotion betrayed
hair :
Lustrous, long, soft, short, shining, curling, wild, straight, silky, tousled, mussed, etc. describe the color, fall, movement,
length, quality, texture
skin : Soft, smooth, tan, pale, naked, touchable, radiant, flawless, satiny, silky, flushed,
moist, hot, cool, warm, flaky, etc. describe color, texture, quality, amount shown, tone
curves : Voluptuous, shapely,
soft, naked, curvaceous, sculpted, exquisite, rounded, angled, pert, dainty, etc. describe the specific body part
senses
: see, hear, feel, taste, touch, ascertain, savor, observe, scent, etc. describe visibility, skill, meaning, type of thing
sensed
emotions : Joy, sadness, anger, delight, happiness, wonder, awe, sorrow, pained, sullen, displeased, amused,
charmed, enchanted, jaded, distracted, engrossed, absorbed, worried, puzzled, confused, etc. describe amount, reason, result
actions : Laugh, smile, frown, giggle, walk, kneel, glide, flow, run, wave, wink, grin, kick, lift, whisper, purr,
rock, shift, wiggle, etc. describe speed, reason, result, quality, emotions
Writting tips
step 1 Try
and visualize what you are doing, the situation you are in, what would be around you, what you would smell, hear, feel, maybe
even taste. Closing your eyes works wonders when you first start to write descriptive posts. Details are important. You
need to paint a picture of what you are doing. Not everyone knows what you look like, or the home, or the lay out. So take
all this into mind when you start.
step 2 Observe. Cant say that enough. Observe. Incorporate words or phrases
you find appealing. Don't be afraid to ask questions. If you don't ask then how you can learn. The only dumb question is the
one that goes unasked.
step 3 Writing. Practice a few posts in note pad. Maybe ask a sister to look it over.
Use a thesaurus to help you come up descriptive words. This helps to make it flow better. You don't want to repeat yourself
over and over, this becomes boring. Keep it lively, draw them into your serve. DON'T serve a Mistress with any less respect
then you would a Master. Serves are detailed to All Frees not just the Ones you may have an interest in or like.
step
4 Now you are ready to try it in the room. Take a few deep breaths and relax, remember this is fun.*smiles*
pointers
*where
are your feet located, during the kneel, during the stand. do your toes curl from a chill on the floor, or from the stress
of standing. *what muscles tense, is there any sweat? *do your knees "creek" *L* or any pain in them? *do you
hear anything? * is there any taste upon your lips, fingers, anything? *eg: salty taste from sweat*, scent.. what smells
are around you?
These are just a few things to think on. Remember make it your own style.
Points to consider
Skin-- Hair-- Head-- Neck-- face-- cheeks-- Chin-- Eyes-- Lips-- Mouth-- Body-- Chest-- Heart-- Breathing-- breast-- Back-- Shoulders-- Arms-- Hands-- ass-- Hips-- Thighs-- Legs-- Feet-- Ankles-- Clothing-- Smells
around you-- Area around you-- Movements-- The flooring/ground-- What you taste-- Touch-- Feel-- The
lighting around you-- The set up-- Props-- How you get from one point to another--
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