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Descriptions

eyes : Deep, bright, shining, sharp, big, soft, beautiful, expressive, glistening, innocent, shimmering, dancing, dull, surprised, sad, angry, furious, flashing, etc. describe the color, lashes, emotion within, cast

mouth : Sweet, kissable, inviting, delicious, full, pouty, thin, succulent, moist, luscious, etc. describe the color, shape, moisture, teeth, emotion betrayed

hair : Lustrous, long, soft, short, shining, curling, wild, straight, silky, tousled, mussed, etc. describe the color, fall, movement, length, quality, texture

skin : Soft, smooth, tan, pale, naked, touchable, radiant, flawless, satiny, silky, flushed, moist, hot, cool, warm, flaky, etc. describe color, texture, quality, amount shown, tone

curves : Voluptuous, shapely, soft, naked, curvaceous, sculpted, exquisite, rounded, angled, pert, dainty, etc. describe the specific body part

senses : see, hear, feel, taste, touch, ascertain, savor, observe, scent, etc. describe visibility, skill, meaning, type of thing sensed

emotions : Joy, sadness, anger, delight, happiness, wonder, awe, sorrow, pained, sullen, displeased, amused, charmed, enchanted, jaded, distracted, engrossed, absorbed, worried, puzzled, confused, etc. describe amount, reason, result

actions : Laugh, smile, frown, giggle, walk, kneel, glide, flow, run, wave, wink, grin, kick, lift, whisper, purr, rock, shift, wiggle, etc. describe speed, reason, result, quality, emotions

Writting tips

step 1
Try and visualize what you are doing, the situation you are in, what would be around you, what you would smell, hear, feel, maybe even taste. Closing your eyes works wonders when you first start to write descriptive posts.
Details are important. You need to paint a picture of what you are doing. Not everyone knows what you look like, or the home, or the lay out. So take all this into mind when you start.


step 2
Observe. Cant say that enough. Observe. Incorporate words or phrases you find appealing. Don't be afraid to ask questions. If you don't ask then how you can learn. The only dumb question is the one that goes unasked.



step 3
Writing. Practice a few posts in note pad. Maybe ask a sister to look it over. Use a thesaurus to help you come up descriptive words. This helps to make it flow better. You don't want to repeat yourself over and over, this becomes boring. Keep it lively, draw them into your serve.
DON'T serve a Mistress with any less respect then you would a Master. Serves are detailed to All Frees not just the Ones you may have an interest in or like.



step 4
Now you are ready to try it in the room. Take a few deep breaths and relax, remember this is fun.*smiles*



pointers

*where are your feet located, during the kneel, during the stand. do your toes curl from a chill on the floor, or from the stress of standing.
*what muscles tense, is there any sweat?
*do your knees "creek" *L* or any pain in them?
*do you hear anything?
* is there any taste upon your lips, fingers, anything? *eg: salty taste from sweat*, scent.. what smells are around you?

These are just a few things to think on. Remember make it your own style.


Points to consider

Skin--
Hair--
Head--
Neck--
face--
cheeks--
Chin--
Eyes--
Lips--
Mouth--
Body--
Chest--
Heart--
Breathing--
breast--
Back--
Shoulders--
Arms--
Hands--
ass--
Hips--
Thighs--
Legs--
Feet--
Ankles--
Clothing--
Smells around you--
Area around you--
Movements--
The flooring/ground--
What you taste--
Touch--
Feel--
The lighting around you--
The set up--
Props--
How you get from one point to another--

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